托福独立写作满分必备之电影类


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不论是写作仍是白话,关于绝大多数同学来说之所以考欠好就是由于脑子里边没东西,平时输入的太少,考场上天然不知道怎么输出。所以想要在这两个部分拿到不错的成果仍是要在考前多记一些东西。一说到记,许多同学就会把它等同于死记硬背。心里一旦有了抵触情绪,花很长时刻也记不下来多少东西不说,即便牵强记下来了,考场上估量也很难用的上。即便用上了,估量也不会灵敏运用,成果天然不会太好。反过来肯定会愈加质疑记东西的有效性。这样一来就更不情愿记了。于是进入了一个恶性循坏。殊不知记东西自身是没有问题的,但怎么记以及记的东西怎么运用是需要考究必定的办法的。下面托福代报就拿回忆复写满分范文的第10篇第2.3段作为例子跟我们说说正确的记段子和用段子的办法,期望各位有所收获。

段子的翻译

 

    喜剧值得观看,由于它们经过让人们大笑而提供了一种很好的放松方式。而大笑事实上被科学证明是削减压力、痛苦和郁闷的最好良药之一。我仍记住当我预备高考(一场至关重要乃至决议一个人未来的考试)时,最为享用的是在忙碌的一天后看一部金凯利的电影。经过那些令人捧腹的情节和金凯利夸大搞笑的扮演,我严重的大脑得到了放松。

 

    另一种电影-惊骇片也值得观看,由于它能够让人们在一个安全的环境下体会惊骇的影响。大多数状况下,人们倾向于寻求不必承当实践危险的文娱。人们肯定是不想在实践生活中体会这种惊骇感的,可是人类猎奇的天分使得人们用电影来表达这种体会。尽管这种心态有些对立,但它有时的确存在。比方,简直一切惊骇片爱好者都享用电影最终当他们如释重负的呼出一口气的感觉。易地而处的体会他人的阅历也能够是一种高兴。

 

段子的英语

 

    Comedies are worth watching, for they provide a good way to relax by making people laugh, and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of the best medicines to alleviate pressure, pain or depression. I can still remember the most enjoyable thing was to watch a Jim Carrey movie after a whole day’s hard work when I was preparing for the college entrance examination—a make-or-break exam that even determines one’s future. Through the dramatic performances of Jim Carrey and those hilarious plots, my intense minds got relaxed.

 

    Another type of movies, scary movie, is also worth watching because it allows people to experience the excitement of horror under a safe circumstance. In most cases, people tend to seek entertainment without taking actual risks. The experience of fear in real life is absolutely undesirable, but the innate curiosity of human beings renders such experience in movies desirable. Though such mindset may be paradoxical, it does exist sometimes. For example, almost every scary-movie lover enjoys the moment when he or she breathes a sigh of relief at the end of the movie. Vicariously sharing the experience of others can be a kind of happiness.

 

怎么记

收拾汉语思路

 

首要我们要搞清楚段子的主题句。并且结合段子的汉语收拾段子打开的要害点,最好能够写成简单的连线的方式。在找要害点的时分能够结合自己的状况。有的同学回忆力很好,可能一句话找一个点就成。有的同学可能需要每句话多找几个点才干记住更准。一般状况下,每一段里边有5-7个点应该就差不多。比方这个段子我们能够找出如下的要害点:

 

    笑是良药 -> 缓解压力、痛苦、郁闷 -> 特别享用 -> 看金凯利的电影 -> 一天辛苦学习完毕 -> 预备高考 -> 夸大扮演和高效的情节 -> 严重的情绪放松

 

    寻求文娱不承当危险 -> 实际中不想惊骇阅历 -> 内涵的猎奇心 -> 想电影傍边惊骇的阅历 -> 对立但的确存在 -> 惊骇片爱好者 -> 完毕长舒一口气 -> 直接共享他人阅历 -> 趣味来历

 

对应英语思路

 

接下来,我们依据英文版的段子,找到对应的汉语的要害点的英语。

 

    laughing -> one of the best medicines -> alleviate pressure, pain or depression -> the most enjoyable thing -> watch a Jim Carrey movie -> after a whole day’s hard work -> prepare for CEE -> dramatic performance and hilarious plots -> intense minds got relaxed

 

    seek entertainment without taking actual risks -> fear in real life undesirable -> innate curiosity of human beings -> experience in movies desirable -> paradoxical -> exist sometimes -> every scary-movie lover -> breathes a sigh of relief -> at the end of the movie -> sharing the experience of others -> a kind of happiness

 

如果我们能够做到闭上眼睛能够想的起来本段的汉语的要害点以及它们所对应的英语,就阐明我们现已把这个段子的脉络把握了。接下来我们就能够开端复写了。

逐句复写

 

从汉语版本的第1句话开端,首要对汉语进行合理的拆分,然后能够别离想想拆出来的每一个部分用英语该怎么表达,然后再跟答案逐个核对。如果每一个表达我们比答案想的都好,那就不必操练了。不然尽量能够将和答案不一样的地方记下来。分句操练的时分必定要注意:一句没记住不要开端下一句, 一起 先捉住本句的句式再去抓要点的短语最终再去纠结单词。拿第1段的第1句话作为例子:

 

句式部分

 

, for 表示原因

 

短语部分

 

be worth doing

 

be proven by science to be sth

 

alleviate pressure

 

把上述句式和短语都搞定了,这句话天然就就记下来了。此刻自傲的同学在脑子里想想证据咋说,然后跟答案比对。不然能够将自己的翻译对着汉语敲一遍,最终跟参阅翻译比较,看看还有没有错。如果有错搞清楚原因,重写本句。如果没有错,能够依照一样的流程开端下一句。关于根底不是特别好的同学,搞定了两句话之后能够把1-2句一起再敲一下。以此类推 1 1-2 1-3 1-4,这样能够确保在写后边的语句的时分前面的语句也会记住越来越熟。不至于呈现1个小时过去了,还停留在全体看的阶段,底子不知道自己是否现已记住了。

按段复写

 

如果每一句都依照上面的规范搞定了,能够尝试对着汉语将本段的英语完好的敲一下,最好时刻别太长,5分钟左右应该能够完结,最多10分钟。由于考试的时分一共30分钟。如果敲现成的一个主体段10分钟都打不完的话考试的时分可能就比较危险了。

 

整段写完之后跟答案进行比对,如果我们真的是依照分句操练一句一句操练过来的话,估量一次就能够达到匹配度95%以上。如果过错较多就要反思一下自己分句操练的时分是否做到了每句话都没错才开端的下一句。仍是分句的时分就现已放水了。

过错反思和要点总结

 

最终一个环节就是收拾,个人觉得收拾的内容最好包含 思路汉语和英语+要点句式+要点短语和单词+过错原因剖析

 

思路汉语和英语

 

    笑是良药 -> 缓解压力、痛苦、郁闷 -> 特别享用 -> 看金凯利的电影 -> 一天辛苦学习完毕 -> 预备高考 -> 夸大扮演和高效的情节 -> 严重的情绪放松

 

    寻求文娱不承当危险 -> 实际中不想惊骇阅历 -> 内涵的猎奇心 -> 想电影傍边惊骇的阅历 -> 对立但的确存在 -> 惊骇片爱好者 -> 完毕长舒一口气 -> 直接共享他人阅历 -> 趣味来历

 

对应英语思路

 

接下来,我们依据英文版的段子,找到对应的汉语的要害点的英语。

 

    laughing -> one of the best medicines -> alleviate pressure, pain or depression -> the most enjoyable thing -> watch a Jim Carrey movie -> after a whole day’s hard work -> prepare for CEE -> dramatic performance and hilarious plots -> intense minds got relaxed

 

    seek entertainment without taking actual risks -> fear in real life undesirable -> innate curiosity of human beings -> experience in movies desirable -> paradoxical -> exist sometimes -> every scary-movie lover -> breathes a sigh of relief -> at the end of the movie -> sharing the experience of others -> a kind of happiness

 

要点句式

 

A is in fact proven by science to be B to X.

 

要点短语

 

make-or-break exam

 

dramatic performance

 

hilarious plots

 

intense minds

 

is worth watching

 

innate curiosity

 

breath a sigh of relief

 

过错原因

 

比方 alleviate, hilarious, innate, vicariously, paradoxical 不会拼,也比方 the most enjoyable thing was 写成 is 等等

怎么用

 

千万别以为段子记住了就万事大吉了,这样可能会考得很惨。有的同学看到考题十分振奋,由于正好某一个段子能套,就张狂地敲啊,一边敲一边窃喜,似乎自己就是最走运的人。成果忘了扣题了。比方有个标题是现在比过去更简单接受教育,有的同学写的是赞同,理由就是现在人压力大所以每个人都尽力去学习。把压力的段子全都搬上去了。但问题是人家问的是现在是不是比过去更简单接受教育,而不是现在的人为什么更情愿学习啊。成果考了14分也是比较正常的。只需用了段子,并且写跑题了,人家马上就能看的出来,分数天然不会高。下面我们结合2个标题来讲讲段子该怎么套。

 

    Agree or disagree, movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.

 

What we have to admit is that it is largely pointless for comedies to present positive stories with similar plots.The reason why comedies are worth watching is that they provide a good way to relax by making people laugh, and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of the best medicines to alleviate pressure, pain or depression. I can still remember the most enjoyable thing was to watch a Jim Carrey movie after a whole day’s hard work when I was preparing for the college entrance examination—a make-or-break exam that even determines one’s future. Through the dramatic performances of Jim Carrey and those unexpected plots in which the wrongdoers fare surprisingly well while the good guys are doomed, my intense minds got relaxed.

 

    Do you agree or disagree? It’s better to relax by reading a book or watching a movie than by doing physical exercise.

 

There is no denying that it is an excellent opportunity for us to relax through watching movies.For one thing, comedies are worth watching, for they provide a good way to relax by making people laugh, and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of the best medicines to alleviate pressure, pain or depression. For another thing, scary movie, is also worth watching because it allows people to experience the excitement of horror under a safe circumstance. In most cases, people tend to seek entertainment without taking actual risks. The experience of fear in real life is absolutely undesirable, but the innate curiosity of human beings renders such experience in movies desirable. Though such mindset may be paradoxical, it does exist sometimes.

 

    People can learn about a person from the books and movies the person likes.

 

It comes as no surprise that the movies a person likes convey a lot of valuable information about one’s personality.For one thing, people fascinated by comedies are inclined to be more optimistic, for comedies provide a good way to relax by making people laugh, and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of the best medicines to alleviate pressure, pain or depression. For another thing, horror-movie lovers tend to place emphasis on experiencing the excitement of horror under a safe circumstance. In most cases, people tend to seek entertainment without taking actual risks. The experience of fear in real life is absolutely undesirable, but the innate curiosity of scary-movie lovers renders such experience in movies desirable. Though such mindset may be paradoxical, it does exist someti