雅思写作文之开头段详解


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托福代报摘要:A good beginning is half done,在审好题列好提纲后,用最短的时刻写出让考官一见钟情的最初段,对烤鸭们的思路和言语功底,都有比较高的要求。
A good beginning is half done,在审好题列好提纲后,用最短的时刻写出让考官一见钟情的最初段,对烤鸭们的思路和言语功底,都有比较高的要求。怎么处理看到标题一片茫然的问题,怎么将你的最初段写的不落入俗套,这三种论题引进办法和其高分表达,带你精辟地归纳标题意思,让你在最初段赢得先机。

一、今昔对比引进:
无论是在最初段引进论题仍是在主体段证明,对比都是个十分好的办法,用我们的日子和从前的日子进行对比(如果觉得从前的日子觉得很模糊,请参阅父辈/祖辈/先人的日子),杰出标题需求大家证明的抵触点,如C9T1的范文:
标题:Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
范文:Traditionally,children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.
经过traditionally介绍曩昔的景象,紧接着用but引出今世人们的观点,经过今昔对比来引出抵触点,瓜熟蒂落。这种办法特别适合科技类、政治经济类、教育类、环境类、文明类、社会日子类论题,比方:父辈们闲暇时只能看月亮数星星,可是科技进步让我们具有多种多样的文娱办法(科技类);几十年前毕业后就很难在作业之余学习其他技术,可是在线教育的普及让许多成年人也能够在家学习(教育类)。
以下表达能够作为参阅:
介绍曩昔的景象:
Traditionally
in the past XX decades
in the last century
one hundred years ago(when……)
引出抵触点:
But
However/Whereas
On the other hand(留意这个短语是表明转机,并不是并列)
Instead/Unlike
Nevertheless/nonetheless
On the contrary/in contrast
二、 下界说引进:
剖析标题,断定论题(比方科技类,教育类,仍是犯罪类),选用下界说的办法来引出标题中要评论的点,如C8T1的范文:
标题:some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
范文:A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
剖析标题,断定这是education类的标题,所以对a child's education进行界说:a child's education has never been about……,然后引出标题中要求证明的点how to be good members of society,准确扣题。
以下表达能够作为参阅
XXX has never been about……instead……
XXX always involves…
XXX can never be avoided/left behind when we discuss…
XXX is nothing more than……
XXX is much more than simply……
XXX is generally considered to be……
三、时代背景引进:
经过时代背景引进,是最常见也最简略上手的办法,行文思路为:某种原因导致了标题中提到的今世很常见的现象,或许愈加简略粗犷点,现如今,标题中提到的现象十分常见/在被热烈评论,如C6T2的范文:
标题:Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others it is unfair.
范文:As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
需求留意的是,范文不是用的千人一面的with the development of,而是as a result of。运用时代背景引进法的烤鸭们,切忌落入俗套。
以下表达能够作为参阅:
The prosperity of XXX has given rise to
With the prosperity/enhancement/advent of
The last fifty years have witnessed……
Over the last half century,……
It is not uncommon that……
It has been noticed that……
It has been widely discussed/argued that