作文高分法则:积累语料 美化语言


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  在托福考试傍边,写作一直是很多考生头疼的一部分。我国考生往往对阅览和听力这种输入型的测验比较内行,而写作是一种输出性的测验,要求考生具有必定的逻辑来安排和输出言语,同学们的作文常常因全体言语过于简单或偏口语化而拿不了高分。

  因此要写出一篇出彩的托福独立写作作文,我们需要从两个方面下手:思路和言语。好的思路是经过操练解题构成,而好的言语则是堆集语料得来。

  就“语料”而,我们平时在看作文范文的时分很大一个使命就是要从中选取自己能够运用的“语料库”。同学们也能够读英文原版的文章、新闻乃至是托福阅览文章,找到自己能运用的词、语句或者是观点,然后像堆积木相同堆积成自己的作文。

  下面由辛达代报经过一道为我们解说如安在作文范文中堆集“语料”:

  标题:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 month a year studying.

  下面是一小段范文阶段:

  What’s more, students need spare time to develop other skills that would benefit their development in turn. People need breaks from their work and study to recreate, to relax, and to be refilled. Also, students should spend time in social activities to develop their skills. For example, party with friends can promote one’s communicating skills when they go around among strangers and try to make friends with them. Also, organizing a social event like a campus music concert can boost one’s leadership skill when they have to lead a group of people and make the final decisions. What’s more, some social activities like a fund raise for the poor can help students to notice the current concerns and issues of the world. All these skills will have a great impact on students’ future development.

  在这个范文阶段中有哪些内容能够用作我们的“语料”呢?

  我们先来看下这句话“For example, party with friends can promote one’s communicating skills when they go around among strangers and try to make friends with them.”

  这句话中“promote one’s communicating skills”的中文意思是“提高交流才能”。那我们还能怎样运用这句话呢?

  比方,当你遇到以下标题“social activities和classes哪个更重要?”,你就能够写“social activities更重要,由于它能promote one’s communicating skills.”

  再如,当你遇到的标题是“你是挑选big company仍是small company作业?”, 你就能够写“挑选big company作业,由于人多,能够promote my communicating skills”。

  最后,“work alone与work in a team哪个更加好?”你就能够写“work in a team更好,由于能够promote one’s communicating skills”.

  学会了怎么堆集“语料库”之后,我们再看托福独立写作范文的时分就能更有用的把读到的言语变为自己所用。以上就是辛达代报带来的文章,希望对大家有所帮助。辛达代报希望大家认真积极的备考,早日取得优异的成绩!