写作高分要多点真诚少用“套路”


辛达代报考位提醒:2017年8月18官网释放考位,在此提醒广大考生抓紧时间报名,如果暂时没有考位的话可以提交给我们代报,广大考生注意考试时间。



摘要:我们在备考托福写作的时分需求留意些什么呢?你们都预备了哪些材料呢?相信我们或多或少的都会预备了一些常用句型,这些习气可能是大多数的国内考试所养成的习气,可是如果你真的强行的应用到托福写作考试傍边,那么你的作文有可能拿不到高分。

在托福写作考试中,许多考生在备考时堆集一些句型,在考试的时分就直接的套进去,乃至有些考生无论是否适用都将它们套用进去,可是收到的作用往往并不如意想的那样。那么为什么为呈现这种状况呢?辛达代报以为为这种做法可能存在的缺陷有二;
一是,一些套句许多考生都在运用,而考官看得太多之后,会以为某些过度依靠套句或模板的考生可能不具备独立写作的才能。特别是当许多同学文章里具体内容很少的时分,这些套句会显得分外刺眼,会导致考官给你比较低的分数。
二是,套句比较僵硬,学生为了运用看似“高档”的套句扩充字数而生搬硬套,导致文不对题,可能直接会影响考生在使命回应(Address Task Efficiently)方面的成果。
那么怎样削减对套句依靠呢?我们需求多想想来龙去脉。
榜首,我们能够用原因状语从句,也就是since, because, as等连词引导的从句
例如: There is no denying that young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market.
这个语句用了There is no denying that 的套句,如果去掉后,我们能够用什么代替呢?
我们能够考虑原因,为什么没承受高等教育的人很难在竞赛剧烈的作业商场中生计,可能是因为大多数公司喜爱雇佣高学历的人或许说高学历在社会上非常重要。
这句话我们能够改成:Young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market because the majority of companies tend to hire job applicants who hold bachelor degree or even master degree.
或许是:As academic qualification is highly valued in the modern society, young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market.
再举个栗子:It should also be noted that keeping regular exercise is of great important for young people.
这个语句用了It should also be noted that 的套句,如果去掉后,我们能够用什么代替呢?
我们能够考虑原因,常常训练为什么对年轻人有优点呢?经过运动,我们能够变得更健康,并且有可能削减得肥胖症、糖尿病等疾病的可能;我们也经过一些体育运动比如慢跑、打羽毛球等开释压力,变得更高兴,等等。
这句话能够改成:Keeping regular exercise is of great important for young people since we can improve physical fitness and we are less likely to suffer from health problems such as obesity or diabetes.
或许是:Keeping regular exercise is of great important for young people due to the fact that sports activities such as jogging or playing badminton enable us to release stress.

第二,多考虑成果。能够运用成果状语从句,或许运用其他引导成果的语句结构也是一个不错的方法。
栗子1:The idea lies in the fact that a considerable number of young people try to learn English rather than study their mother tongue.
如果不运用the idea lies in the fact that的套句,我们想一想年轻人学习英语而不是母语这个现象的成果。例如,这个行为可能会导致一些少数言语的消失、一起文明多样性也受到影响。运用成果状语从句,语句能够改为:
A considerable number of young people try to learn English rather than study their mother tongue so minority languages may die out and cultural diversity is affected adversely.
栗子2:It is worth mentioning that young people are obsessed with electronic devices with up-to-date features.
这个语句也运用了套句,如果去掉后,我们除了能够考虑原因(年轻人为什么痴迷于购买最新的电子产品)之外,还能够说年轻人很多购买电子产品所产生的成果。例如,过度消费可能会给他们的家庭形成经济负担。
运用非限定性定语从句表明成果:
Young people are obsessed with electronic devices with up-to-date features, which may impose a financial burden on their families.
故而在这里提醒我们的是,不是一切的句型都适用每一篇作文,套用也是需求依据实际状况来决议的。希望我们在写作的时分多点真挚,少些“套路”,这样你的托福作文或许得高分的机率就大大提升了。最终,辛达代报预祝我们托福考试能获得抱负的成果。