写作主题句写作方法


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摘要:在托福写作傍边,主题句是很重要的,又能够称为中心句,基本上主题句能够统领整个文章。往往在托福独立写作傍边主题句的效果显得很重要,那么主题句的写法应该如何写呢?这儿辛达代报就带我们一同为学习一下托福写作主题句的写法,期望能够协助到我们。
什么是主题句?所谓主题句(topic sentence, 也有人叫它中心句),就是独立写作主体段中统领全文的那个语句,也就是表述在独立写作脑筋风暴和谋篇布局时分想到的“首要理由”或许“观点”的那个语句。一般一篇独立写作有三个主题句。下面辛达代报就带我们托福写作主题句写作要求,我们一同来学习一下吧。

例如在题目“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is betterto work in large companies than in small ones.”,选择agree,三个主题句能够是:
The first reason is that a large company can provide more opportunities to develop one’s ability
Another reason for choosing a big company involves welfare.
A third reason is that one who appreciates the unique culture of abig enterprise will become a more responsible person to the society.
在托福写作中,三个主题句能够说是作文中最重要的一组语句,由于主题句对阶段起到“纲举目张”的效果,一起对整篇文章的结构清晰度和文章逻辑性也至关重要。
如何将这个理由“完好”“清晰”“出彩”的表达出来就是本文评论的论题。
首要,每段主题句一般都坐落段首,紧跟于“first, second, third”这些“信号词”之后。除此之外还需要留意以下几点。
丨短小精悍
主题句需要让读者看到之后能够快速、精确地把握本段的首要内容。这要求我们在写主题句的时分,一方面内容要简略,另一方面用语要凝练。
先来看一个不和比方:
“First and foremost, television, invented in the last century, withits wide availability and increasingly prosperous programs ,becomes one of the most powerful means of communication in history, and is more and more difficult to ignore”
这个主题句包括的内容太多,读完这个语句,读者底子不明白本段是要陈说电视节目蓬勃发展(increasingly prosperous program), 要着重电视是最强力的交流东西(the most powerful means of communication in history),仍是要证明电视不行被忽视(difficult to ignore),这就是一个典型的内容太杂乱的主题句。
再看一个反例:
“First of all, following the new customs can show a sense of respect,which can allow a better and faster adaption inside the local population so that they make more friends.”
这个语句也有两个观点:表明尊重(show a sense of respect),扩展交际(make more friends),相同也使读者不能捉住本段的首要内容。
如何防止这种过错,使主题句内容简略呢?很简略,首要做到每个主题句有且只要一个观点。观点就是指我们脑筋风暴时分想到的那些“key words”,比方健康,安全,情感等等,每段写一个,不要把健康和安全放在同一个阶段,也不要把情感和成功放在同一个阶段。
例如上面第二个比方,我们只需要删去一个观点,就能够变得十分简练:
“To start with, accepting cultures in the foreign country is an indispensable element that contributes to the expansion of social circle.”这是一个简练的主题句,只要扩展交际(contributes to the expansion of social circle)这一个观点。
观点仅有还不一定能彻底做到简练,来看另一个反例:
“The first reason why letting children care for animals isnot the best way to teach them about responsibility is that it could negatively impact a child’s health.”
这句话虽然只要一个观点,可是用语太冗杂,让人头晕。主题句的语法不主张太杂乱,主张我们把花式操作留到其他部分去秀,在主题句,只要写一些简略句,例如:“First, raising pets will exert a negative impact on a child’shealth.”就行了。

丨不是陈说事实
来看下面两个语句:
A: “First, some children might be infected by feeding animals.”
B: “First, raising pets could negatively impact a child’s health.”
哪一个是好的主题句呢?
答案是B。
由于A句的内容是一个“朴实的事实”,而B句则是“笼统的概念”(exert negative impact),换言之,A句能够作为B句的比方,但B句不能作为A句的比方。
陈说事实的语句是不能作为主题句的,事实是不言自明的。不言自明,也就不需要后面的文字来“证明”了。主题句需要写“a sentence that you could give examples for”,而不能写一个 “example”。
来操练判别下面几组语句中哪一个能够做主题句呢?
A: “Second, the academic performance of some children becomes poor after they are responsible for caring for a pet.”
B:“Second, caring for a pet could disrupt a child’s regular studies.”
A: “First, people could learn how to communicate with eachother through participating in community activities”
B: “First, participating in community activities is apractical and effective approach to enhance their social skills.”
A: “First, letting children take care of animal is a good suggestion for the reason that kids like animals.”
B: “To start with, raising pets fill friendship vacuums and satisfy people’s need to nurture"
(答案:三组都是B句较好)
丨运用高档词汇
许多同学要问,如果主题句中不主张运用杂乱句型,又不能呈现多层结构,那如何显现自己的言语功力呢?要知道我们展现言语才能的当地并非只要杂乱的句型,丰厚和精准的词汇运用,相同能够展现英语的专业程度。比方
“First, go to museums can teach people different kinds of knowledge”
→ “First, visiting museums provide people with an opportunity to comprehend a vast amount of knowledge”
想想看,如果本来语句中只会写“good”之处,替换为“advantageous, beneficial, effective, efficacious, favorable,invaluable, rewarding, unparalleled, unprecedented”等等词汇,效果是不是更好呢?如果多次呈现“important”的当地,改写为“central, critical ,crucial, decisive, essential, pivotal, primary,principal, vital,a key to, an indispensable part, play a pivotal role, attach great importance to”会不会添加可读性呢?
在平常的阅读中,留意积累一些“高档词汇”,精确把握词义,而且故意操练运用这些词汇,逐步就会获得不错的写作成果。
以上就是辛达代报为我们带来的托福写作主题句的写法,期望我们在对待主题句的时分能够有个参阅。最后,辛达代报预祝我们托福考试能获得理想的成果。