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摘要：托福写作考试是整个托福考试中，仅有一个需求考生用文字书面表达出来的一个考试科目。这其中，使得考生失分有时可能会是一些语句过错，因而需求引起考生的要点留意。那么我们应该留意哪些语句呢?这儿辛达代报为我们整理了25个托福作文常见的病句及修正主张，期望能够帮助到我们。
在托福写作考试中，许多考生会由于自己的托福写作答题中呈现一些病句而使用自己的作文得不到高分。考生因而而失分真的是太惋惜了。那么考生在平常考试中经常会遇到哪些病句呢?这儿辛达代报为我们整理了25个托福写作考试中常呈现的过错语句以及其改善主张，期望我们在考试的时分自己的作文傍边不要由于这些过错而失分。快来一同学习一下吧。

1. I am not good at maths, but English
改善: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
改善: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
3.It is children who clear about their interests.
改善: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是我们在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)
改善: I agree with the latter idea.
5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改善: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改善: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是我们在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)
改善：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
8. No one knows all the things.
改善: No one knows everything.
9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
改善: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.
改善: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.
改善: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改善: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
13. They will learn the bad habits.
改善: They will develop bad habits.
14. In this continued process, people make progress.
改善: In this cycle, people make progress.
15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改善: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改善: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改善: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改善: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
改善: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
20. I felt alone.
21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
改善: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
改善: Cigarettes can help you relax.
23. What’s about nonsmokers?
改善: What about nonsmokers?
24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
改善: Why not be a non-smoker?
25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
改善: Everyone has friends in his life.
以上25个语句就是考生在托福写作考试中经常会用过错的语句，现已给出了改善主张，期望我们在备考的时分能够留意到这些，提高自己的备考功率，在托福考试中就不会让这样有过错的语句呈现在你的作文中，然后影响得分了。最后，辛达代报预祝我们托福考试能取得抱负的成果。