一、 五段式中用于第三个主体段

　　在五段式的高文文中，三个主体段一般都是以“单边”的方法，“一边倒”的支撑某一个观念。而若将最终一个主体段写成退让段，不只能够照顾到反方的论点，而且更有利于进一步支撑和强化本段的观念，从而起到强化论说的作用：

　　Obviously， not every celebrity is generous. Some， I am sure， keep all their money for themselves. But there are people like Bill Gates who are well known for making donations， attending charitable functions and taking part in a range of activities that support people less fortunate than themselves。

　　在写退让段的时分，咱们有必要要运用表“转机”的连词，常用的有but， however， nevertheless， nonetheless等。有时分咱们还能够运用退让状语从句来引导退让段，涉及的连词有：despite， in spite of， although， though， even though， even if等。在上面这个比如中，咱们看到作者用了2个简单句来描绘反面的观念，关于用来描绘反面观念的语句，主张一般以1—3句话为宜，而转机后的语句，通常在长度上要超过前面的语句。下面咱们再来看一个退让段：

　　标题：Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it， yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree with this statement?

　　It is possibly true that schools could try to make children understand the importance of all these areas， but children are young and cannot look into the future or predict the skills that they will need。

　　上面这个退让段非常简洁，请注意作者运用的句型：“It is possibly true that.……”，这是咱们在退让段里常常用来开头的句型。下面咱们再来看看如何用退让状语从句引导退让段：

　　Although watching TV or playing computer games do enrich children‘s spare time and broaden their horizon to some extent， a sedentary lifestyle reduces healthy outdoor activities and will have long-term medical consequences for children. An increasing number of children suffer from obesity and near-sightedness as a result of spending too much time in front of a flashing screen。

　　在这个阶段中，作者运用了退让状语从句，在持续论说“久坐”的生活方法对孩子健康方面的坏处前，先说了一下它的优点，进而辩驳，从而起到了明显的对比反差作用，突出了这种生活方法对孩子健康造成的巨大损伤。

　　二、五段式每段都用退让段

　　这种写法归于非主流写法，需求考生具备必定的写作功底，对论点的把握火候妥当。这种写法类似于新托福中综合写作里质疑论据合理性的写法。关于志在高分的同学来说能够测验一下，下面咱们就来看一个比如：

　　Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animal in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults. Even if it were possible， it would also take much longer to see potential effects， because of the length of time we live compared to laboratory animals such as rats or rabbits。

　　Opponents of animal testing also claim that the results are not applicable to humans. This may be partly true. Some drugs have had to be withdrawn， despite testing. However， we simply do not have alternative methods of testing. Computer models are not advanced enough， and testing on plants is much less applicable to humans than tests on animals such as monkeys. Until we have a better system， we must use animal testing。

　　A further point often raised against animal testing is that it is cruel. Some of the tests certainly seem painful， but the great majority of people on this planet eat meat or wear leather without any guilt. Where is their sympathy for animals? Furthermore， animals clearly do not feel the same way as humans， and scientists are careful to minimize stress in the animals， since this would damage their research。

　　这篇作文是关于是否应该拿动物做试验的论题。作者是支撑持续拿动物做试验的，在他的每个主体段中，他都是先讲了反对者的一个观念，然后再辩驳。请亲近重视下作者在每个主体段首句中运用的句型：“Those against.…… claim that.……”：“Opponents of .…… also claim that.……”：“A further point often raised against .…… is that.……”。

　　前2句为宾语从句，最终一句为表语从句。从主语的选择上作者也花了心思，分别在第一句和第二句运用了不同单词组合，但是意思是一致的。因此主张咱们无妨在一开始写主体段首句的时分先仿照他的这种写法。接下来咱们再来看看次句的句型：“I disagree completely”：“This may be partly true”：“Some of the .……， but.……”。

　　这三组句型同样做到了抑扬顿挫，第一个语句口气最强，然后二个语句口气明显递减。关于这种组织，笔者认为并非必定要按照他的形式，这取决于你在三个阶段中的观念的排列，但是一般来说，口气最强的或许最重要的那个观念，要么放在第一段写，要么放到最终一段里写。笔者推荐将最重要的观念放在第一个主体段里论说。

　　综上所述，退让段现已俨然成为了现在五段式高文文的常用阶段发展方法，辛达小编希望以上的评论对咱们在写退让段时有所启迪。