托福作文高分技巧:如何“造句”


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新托福写作主要考察咱们对英文的综合运用能力,其中,对语言的运用尤为重视。很多考生反映,尽管积累了很多词汇,可是却不能精确地整合出托福写作高分句型。下面,辛达小编为咱们整理托福作文高分技巧,在遣词和造句两方面为咱们提供方法。

造句要做到精确、多样以及高分表达

1. 句型剖析

英语的句型包含以下几种,简单句、复合句、并排句、并排复合句等。在新托福写作中,一般运用复合句,辅以并排句和并排复合句,当然必定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘录几个语句给咱们知道并剖析一下复合句和并排复合句。

a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的退让状语从句。

b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释阐明。

c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

上句话是一个并排杂乱句。and 衔接了两个语句,是一个并排句;because引导的原因状语从句。

d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

这句话同样是并排杂乱句。由and衔接两个语句,成为并排句,再一个which引导的定语从句。

2. 有问题的语句的罗列

剖析以为,考生写的语句简单出现三个问题:一是运用破碎句,二是运用连续句,三是语句衔接不正确。

1) 破碎句

所谓破碎句,便是语句不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语方式,如分词),或者是从句独自成句。

破碎句:She singing alone.(无谓语,singing是现在分词)

正确句:She is singing alone.

破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick.(从句独自成句)

正确句:He did not come because he was sick.

2) 连续句

所谓连续据,便是两个语句直连续在一同,既未运用连词,也未运用正确的标点符号。

连续句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

3) 语句衔接不正确

所谓语句衔接不正确,便是两个独立的语句之间以逗号衔接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等衔接两个语句。

不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

高分表达

除了在句式上长短句相结合精确表达外,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议新托福考生要运用一些特殊的句式,以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了咱们之前经常提到的高分句式,如倒装句、着重句、状语前置、插入语等,笔者还提出另外一个句式的多样变化,即主语多样化。下面笔者将罗列几个语句归纳介绍前面四种句型,而重点剖析主语多样化。

正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

倒装句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)

正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.

着重句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information.(着重the internet)

正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

状语前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.

正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

插入语: New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.(连词however做插入语)

主语多样

1. 她忽然想到了一个主见。

She suddenly had an idea.

通常情况下,考生会马上对这句话进行翻译,基本不会动语句结构。可是以人作为主语的英语语句总是不能够很吸引人,所以这个语句如果稍微做下修正,今后面的宾语“主见”做主语,这个语句会发作一些变化。

An idea suddenly occurred to her.

2. 他开车心猿意马,几乎闯祸。

He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.

这句话依然是拿人做主语,稍微改一下,把心猿意马这个形容词的名词方式做主语,会大不相同。

His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.

3. 美利坚合众国创立于1789年。

The United States of America was founded in 1789.

这句话没有任何过错,可是不行多样,能够用时间作主语。

The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.

实用句型

在文章的最后,天道留学为咱们罗列几个新托福考试中能够运用的套用句型,为一些写语句摸不着条理的考生提供帮助。

1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.

努力预备新托福考试是值得的。

2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的了。

3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.

白领压力日益增加的原因是他们在事业上有所寻求。

4. It is time the related department took proper measures.

(虚拟句式)相关部分早该采取恰当的办法了。

以上是托福作文高分技巧,本文主要教咱们遣词造句的能力,咱们多多练习,就能将词汇储备为己所用。




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