写作低分的7个语法问题分析


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摘要:托福写作考试作为托福考试傍边一个很大的输出考试科目,如果你的想要你的托福作文获得高分,那么关于你的作文傍边的语法问题就要特别的留意,不要由于语法问题而使得你的托福作文得低分。那么你对托福写作语法问题有哪些了解呢?
在整个托福考试中,真实关于语法有要求的还要属托福写作考试了,因这个部分是要以文字的方式表现的,所以如果你的作文傍边有一些语法问题的话,你的托福作文想要获得高分基本是不太可能的。这儿辛达代报就为我们带了托福写作考试傍边的7个语法问题使用你托福写作失分的解说,期望对我们提升托福写作分数有帮助。

1、中式英语
原:Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.
改:Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.
评:中文习气说“人们能够更容易地招引老板的留意力”,而英语则习气说“It’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要留意中英表述习气的差异哦!
2、 用词不当
原:The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
改:The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
评:groupwork是“分组”或许“小组团体使命”的意思。这位同学本来想说teamwork“团队协作”,却用了一个看起来很像,但实践彻底不同的词,表达出来的意思就风马牛不相干了。
原:You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
改:You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
评:dangerous表明所润饰的对象是“带来风险的,有风险性的”,而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。究竟谁才是要挟呢?
原:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.
改:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.
评:容貌长得像,意思可不同了。这儿想用动词affect表明“影响”,却误写为名词effect“效果”,一字千里啊!
3、调配过错
原:Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.
改:Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.
评:这位同学显着记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法,写出来的语句自然会出问题啦。
原:Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
改:Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
评:此处是一个显着的动宾调配过错。“进步……技巧”应该是improve the skills,而不是increase the skills.
4、词性错位
原:I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.
改:I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.
评:sad是形容词,而这儿显着需求一个名词,应该是sadness。
原:Although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.
改:…, spending time with the family is equally significant.
评:形容词significant前需求用副词来润饰,所以equal应该改成equally。
5、时态紊乱
原:Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
改:Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
评:过去时的语句中冒出了现在时,同学你太大意了,要仔细检查哦~
原:I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.
改:I’d like to explain… / I will explain…
评:可能是两种说法记混了吧,成果把时态搞错了……
6、主谓不一致
原:The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
改:The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
评:谓语之前有两个名词时,主谓调配的问题就常常呈现了。这儿真实的主语应该是奇数名词the way,所以与之调配的谓语也应该是奇数的is。
7、重复负担
原:From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.
改:From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.
评:from my point of view和I think重复啦,保留一个就好。当然这儿主张留下更“高档”的from my point of view.
原:There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.
改:Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.
评:中文句式说的“有很多人……”,但别一看到“有”就非要用there be句型不行哦,直接摆出主谓宾就行了。
“things that can be memorized for long”,被动语态显着更地道~
以上就是辛达代报为我们带来了托福写作考试傍边7个语法过错应该防止,最常见的7个语法过错如果在备考的过程中不能战胜的话,那么仍是比及你预备好了之后再去参与吧,不然惋惜了那一千多块的考试费不多,你的时间和精力也是一种丢失。最后,辛达代报预祝我们托福考试能获得抱负的成果。