雅思写作:如何评价带节奏


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  词汇的含义有褒贬。在写作中,“褒”与“贬”或许被冠以bigger 的名称,即“正点评”和“负点评”。辛达雅思代报认为咱们在议论一件事情的时分,总是依靠这些正点评和负点评让读者知道咱们的态度和态度的。


  在雅思写作中,辛达雅思代报打个比方咱们觉得“消费者寻求知名品牌不是一件好事情”,咱们或许会说“知名品牌是会误导人的”;比方咱们“不同意把钱花在探究世界上”, 咱们或许会说“世界探究就是糟蹋人力物力和时间”;再比方咱们觉得“有本领比有愿望重要”,咱们或许会说“本领是实实在在的,是有产出的,而愿望是空洞的,于是往往也是无效的”。


  咱们把方才用来表态的词剔出来看看:“误导”、“糟蹋”、“实实在在的”、“有产出的”、“空洞的”、“无效的”。咱们发现咱们下意识地用到了“正点评” 和“负点评”来让读者明白咱们对事物 的态度和观点。


  那么,重点来了,咱们其实能够有意识地用“正 / 负点评”去引导咱们的读者“买咱们的账”,明白咱们的态度, 让咱们的证明更清晰清晰。那么怎么做到“有意识地用”呢?辛达雅思代报认为首要,咱们要知道写作时首要依靠(可是不限于)的正负点评词是动词和形容词。回看方才的“误导”和“糟蹋”就很有或许在英语表达时被选用对应的动词的方式,“实实在在的”、“有产出的”、“空洞的”、“无效的” 就很有或许在英语表达时被选用对应的形容词的方式。


  道理就是很简单,咱们看两个比如来诠释一下上面的道理。

  例一:

  When there is no specific dress code, employees wear whatever makes them comfortable. As they feel comfortable, they work with their best state. As a result, their work performance is likely to be high. However, while a worker may be comfortable in the clothes of his or her free choice, his or her peers may be uncomfortable seeing him or her because the clothes may be inappropriate for the workplace. For example, a dress that is too feminine may be delightful for the female who wears it, but it is harassing for the colleagues of the opposite sex. In this case, while this female may perform well as she is pleased, the harassed coworkers do not, and the performance of the whole staff is compromised.

  阶段中的正点评词(comfortable、best state)显着比负点评词(uncomfortable、i n a p p r o p r i a t e 、t oo 、h a r a s s i n g 、compromised)少,于是读者就能够清晰的感知到作者的态度是“我觉得不 OK”。

  例二:

  Health problems are the chief disadvantage. They may happen to both infants and the women. Because of the age, older women are at greater risk of having medical conditions when they bear a baby. This is because the decrease of the body's function with the increase of age renders women less robust. Meanwhile, the mother's poor health is unfavorable to the baby’s growth in the womb. For example, many babies suffer from malnutrition. 阶段中只出现了负点评 词(at greater risk of、render、less robust、unfavorable、suffer from、malnutrition)于是证明的内容就清晰地对应了评论 disadvantage,作者的写作目的便一望而知。

  当然,还有更多的比如能够被展示, 可是万变不离“正 / 负点评”之宗,在培养起“成心”使用正 / 负点评词的习气之后,首要,咱们就知道就预备雅思写作而言,找到那些词汇抓住回忆和练习它们的语用了。或许,也许我应该直说:请首要抓住回忆和练习那些有正负点评含义的(首要但不限于)动词和形容词。下一步就是在一些比较根底的常见的词汇的根底上“升级”到不那么常用的 bigger 的词汇并且稳固对那些 bigger 词汇的认识和习气性使用了。以上便是辛达雅思代报今天和大家分享的内容,希望对大家能够有所帮助