Discuss both views题型怎么做?


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1.写作误区一:两边观念平分秋色

很多考生只留意到了“discuss both views”而疏忽了后面的“give your own opinion”。因而在写作时,对两种观念没有做出具有倾向性的区别,仅仅很“客观”的陈说了两种观念的优点。辛达雅思代报认为这样写将会丢掉不少内容分数,由于短少了“自己的观念”这一重要的内容。

2.写作误区二:只分别陈说,没有相应的比照

题中给出的两种观念,必定各有利弊。假如在考试中考生仅仅简略的分段对每一种观念进行的陈说,并没有做出比照,然后就直接做出一个具有倾向的选择,文章的质量将大打折扣,在内容和逻辑上都将丢掉宝贵的分数。

写作逻辑

简略式:
Introduction
View One
View Two
Your Opinion
Conclusion
这种写作之所以简略是由于:1)不需求在introduction中标明自己的观念,下降了表述的难度;2)思路简略,只需求将两种观念分开论说即可,不需求复杂的思维进程;3)节省时间,能够直接动笔。但辛达雅思代报认为这种写作具有显着的漏洞:1)短少比较的进程,不容易取得考官的喜爱;2)对于言语程度不是很好的考生来说,很容易让自己的观念看起来混乱,不明晰,并因此而丢掉分数。

所以,对于想考取抱负分数的考生来说,这样一种“省时省力”的写作方法并不值得推荐。接下来,辛达雅思代报将为咱们推荐一种备受考官喜爱的写作方法:

比照式:
Introduction
One advantage of view one, compared with view two
Another advantage of view one, compared with view two
One advantage of view two
Conclusion

假如考生觉得View One的观念更好,则能够用上述方法来论说:
首先,在introduction中明晰标明自己的态度。如:All possible benefits brought by View One convince me to promote/support it.
其次,分段罗列View One的两点优点,并与View Two做比照。如:Doing XXXX (view one) could evoke students’ further interests on learning relative subjects. However, doing XXXX (view two) may stop students from digging out their potentials. 在此,需求着重View One优点,以及View Two的弊端,并做出相关解说说明。

再次,作为迂回(折中)段,能够罗列一个View Two的一个优点。如:Regardless of mentioned limitations, View Two does have one merit, which is … 并解说或举例说明为什么View Two具有这种优点。
最后,在结尾段着重自己的选择即可。

事例说明:
剑桥真题7-Test 2
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Introduction: 明晰表达自己的观念:I prefer a flexible punishment to a fixed one.
One advantage of the flexible punishment with comparison: a flexible punishment could be an effective solution to reduce criminal rate, as it is able to eliminate some triggers of criminal behavior. Compared with it, a fixed punishment cannot avoid potential crimes, since it neglects the real reason of those committed criminal behaviors.
论点一:灵敏地判罚能够有用的预防犯罪,然后下降犯罪率;但固定共同的判罚不能够,由于其没有从根本上杜绝诱发犯罪的原因。

Another advantage of flexible punishment with comparison: Not everybody deserves the serious sentence if he or she was forced to do it. However, giving criminals fixed punishment deprives their opportunity of rehabilitation.
论点二:假如他们是被迫做出犯罪行为,那就应该给他们一个改过自新的时机。但一味的重罚剥夺了他们的这项权力。

One advantage of fixed punishment: Admittedly, fixed punishment is an option of reducing criminal rate in a short-term, as everybody would try their best to avoid punishing. Conversely, it does not work as a long-term approach.
折中:固定的惩罚能够在短期内下降犯罪率,可是不是一个长久之计。
在本段,咱们需求必定固定惩罚的优点,可是不要过度必定,依然需求隐射出其中暗含的问题。

Conclusion: Considering those two impacts the flexible punishment has on reducing criminals, I strongly insist that we should advocate such punishment, not only to give another chance to those criminals, but also to prevent potentials crimes via removing criminal triggers.
在结尾段,再次着重灵敏判罚的优点,并重申自己的观念。

思路总结:本文辛达雅思代报着重讲解了discuss both views这种写作题型的答题技巧。在此,做出简短总结:在最初段标明自己的观念,继而罗列出该观念的2个优点,并与另一观念做比照;然后折中必定对方观念的优势(但仍需指出其中的问题),最后结尾段重申自己的观念。

通过对过往多年题目的剖析,专家认为包含比照,并在文中已清晰表达出自己观念态度的文章很受外籍考官的喜爱。由于这样的写作更具综合性,逻辑上也愈加紧密。同时,不断的比照能够从更多的方面展示出考生在言语,尤其是词汇上的堆集。由于,对于众多胸襟愿望的“烤鸭”来说,这种写作更容易取得高分。

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