如何提升雅思写作的效率?


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雅思写作一直是许多小考鸭的软肋:存在短少output的操练,表达的不熟练,思想的局限,关于模板句的依靠等问题。要想进步雅思写作的能力,操练是王道,同时,需求词汇的堆集,表达的练习,结构的把握,思路的拓宽,标题的熟悉,以及速度的提升。今天,辛达雅思代报就从审题视点来跟咱们聊聊,如何有用地进步写作效率。

咱们先来看这样一道雅思标题:
Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?
许多同学拿到手第一时刻就会用天性反响做出挑选。白叟家当然应该在家里由子女自己来照料,怎样能够送白叟院呢?然后,就开端火急地写作文。然而写着写着,或许会发现要么论据不够充沛,写到一半无话可些,要么某些主意在用英文表达时,遇到太多的妨碍。
审题的过程应拆解为如下4步:
1.读题意
2.辨题型
3.列提纲
4.选态度

1、读题意

这一步相对比较简略,雅思写作题干一般不会有杂乱的长难句,辛达雅思代报认为只要咱们认识所有的单词即可。当然假如遇到生词,也有两个方法能够处理。

一是借助上下文猜。如下面这道标题:Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? 其中的第一个单词disruptive或许就有同学不认识,不知道精确意思。可是后文中的students who are "noisy and disobedient"的同义解说,不难让咱们得出"喧嚷的,不守规则的"这样的意思。
二是通读机经,扫除生词。由于,不见得所有的生词都能够猜得了。有时标题中出现"censorship"(检查制度) 、"anti-social behavior"(反社会行为)、"juvenile delinquency"(青少年犯罪)这样意义比较专业的生词,考生们基本是无法根据上下文推出精确意思的,比较好的处理方法便是通读机经。

2.辨题型
所谓题型,实践便是标题最后半句话的写作指令,写作要求。不同题型,写作要求不同,逻辑过程不同,阶段结构不同,也会直接影响下一步的列提纲作业需求做的操作。
雅考虑试的大作文一般分为五种题型,每种标题的命题方式都有非常清晰的标志。下面为咱们罗列的是每种不同题型的示例,咱们留心后面的粗体字写作指令即可。
赞同与否
Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree?
Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not eliminate the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
双边评论
Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media, while others argue that it will hinder information freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion。
利害剖析
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at a primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
问题处理
Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
归纳提问
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this case? Is it a positive development?

3.列提纲
说起来简略,所谓的列提纲,无非便是想标题需求的论据进行罗列,包含:赞同或敌对某个观念的理由,事物的优缺点,问题的原因、后果、处理方案等等。可是实践上不同的论题,难度不同,咱们能够列出有用论据的难度也不同。就算是简略的标题,仍然要经历一个"想"和"挑选"的阶段。
让咱们回到方才的例题,来做一个示范:
Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?
首先,"想"便是咱们所说的brainstorming的过程。根据对标题的正确理解,考生能够先将论题的两个敌对面的优缺点都尽量地详细考虑剖析一番,而并不要仅仅执着地去想自己的先入为主或者天性挑选的"在家照料爸爸妈妈"的好处。这样,能够让自己后面的决议愈加客观,让沉着而非情感来决议咱们的态度。当然这道标题本身不难,所以,信任大部分考生都能够想到下面的这些观念。
能够用下面的表格来做一个两边论据比较。
At home VS nursing house
1. 与家人的情感沟通,归属感1. 与其他白叟(同龄人/朋友)的沟通
2. 便利、贴心的照料2. 专业的照料,医疗(避免意外)
3. 传统,尽孝道,职责,责任,3. 适应社会发展趋势
4. 分管家务,带孩子4. 丰厚多彩的活动
5. 省钱(服务好的白叟院比较贵重)5. 省心(不用忧虑爸爸妈妈)
应该说,这样的一个提纲,正反两边论据一一对应,不管挑选任何一边作为态度,都会有充沛的内容能够发挥。可是,在考生真实动笔写之前,必定要先考虑一个问题,那便是,这些内容用英文会不会有表达不了的?不管是词汇上的妨碍,仍是表达清晰度的困难?
所以,辛达雅思代报认为挑选作业就很重要了。考生要看看自己所想到的内容傍边有没有被逼要从文章傍边去掉的观念。
包含:
短少词汇支撑的
难以表达清楚的
证明力度较弱的
短少词汇支撑的
从词汇上来剖析,咱们需求用到的有必定难度的词组主要有:family bound(家庭归属感), professional medical service(专业的医疗服务),social trends(社会趋势),fulfill one's filial duty(尽孝道),responsibility and obligation(职责和责任)。
而这傍边关于咱们最困难的,莫过于要表达类似"在中国子女们都会挑选自己照料爸爸妈妈,由于孝顺爸爸妈妈、尽孝道是历来的传统,是子女的职责和责任"的观念。当然,就算不认识以上词组,聪明的同学也会想到用paraphrase的方法尽量表达自己的意思,可是词汇上必定有差劲,更何况更多人或许会绞尽脑汁仍是想不到最后才被逼抛弃。所以"what you want to say"其实并不重要,"what you can say"才是要害。
难以表达清楚的
有些主意,在交谈中,咱们用中文简略几个字就能够让对方明白意思。可是写作,尤其是雅思写作则彻底不同。评分标准Task Response一项中,关于论据的拓宽有着清晰的要求,要求考生"present,extend,and support main ideas",避免"over-generalize"。有些观念拓宽起来有难度,或者是过于抽象无法拓宽,所以考生们都应该根据实践的状况做出取舍。
例如方才的支撑爸爸妈妈在白叟院日子的理由中,"适应社会发展趋势",便是比较难解说清楚的一条,更不用说,或许同样会遇到词汇的妨碍。
证明力度较弱的
后这一条指的是,当支撑一方态度有足够多的论据而且都能够顺利表达时,考生应该尽量挑选逻辑性更强,愈加直接的论据来写,而证明作用相对较弱的能够挑选去掉。比方,支撑爸爸妈妈在家与子女日子的论据中,"省钱"和"分管家务",以及支撑爸爸妈妈在白叟院日子的论据中"适应社会发展趋势",这几条实践便是属于后者力度较弱的论据。由于,究竟大部分不是为了省钱和做家务而把爸爸妈妈留在家里,也绝不是为了赶时髦而把爸爸妈妈送白叟院。

4、选态度
其实,假如经过了方才的考虑和挑选的过程,做决议便是一件简略且愈加有把握的工作了。或许关于这道标题,多数考生会发现,挑选"爸爸妈妈在白叟院日子"作为态度,好像论据更充沛,发挥起来也更简单。当然,这并不意味着,咱们要改变自己真实的主意,真的把爸爸妈妈都送白叟院,咱们仅仅用"更聪明"的心态写了一篇作文罢了。
当然,咱们的终究意图还有进步写作速度。咱们将方才挑选的态度--爸爸妈妈在白叟院日子--的论据稍作摆放如下:
专业的医疗照料,避免意外
子女愈加省心
白叟院的同龄人多,有更多沟通
愈加丰厚的活动
这时,考生唯一需求做的还剩两件事,其一,将论据在心中稍作拓宽,自然整理一遍要害词;其二,组织言语,也便是一个连词成句、语句组段的作业,再略微留意一下连接和联接即可。而这一步,正是考生经过听教师讲解后,自己反复操练,最简单进步熟练度和效率的部分。
具体的操作,咱们能够参考下面的以前两条论据写作body段1的示范:
1.Professional medical care'old people health problem'facility +equipment+ staff' always available'emergency'quickly respond'accident/tragedy avoid
2.Adult children' no need to worry'focus on career
基本上,整段话的要害词都在这儿罗列了出来,剩余的时刻,学生几乎都已在5-8分钟内写好一个100字左右的阶段出来。
Most obviously and importantly, aged parents can be well tended in nursing houses. As is known to all, old people usually suffer from the pain of all kinds of diseases or the potential health hazards, while in nursing houses they can receive professional care, with first-class medical facilities equipped and experienced staff always available. Therefore, the possible risks could be minimized and numerous accidents can be avoided, because when emergency happens, nursing houses will definitely respond more promptly than family, who are not likely to be with their aged parents all the time. At the same time, adults don't have to be distracted or worry about their parents, so they can better focus on their career, which benefits the society in some senses。

经过辛达雅思代报上述内容,不难看出,有用的审题,不仅能够帮你更好地挑选合适的态度,减小半途而废的风险,更能够将写作过程中构思内容的部分独立出来,在写作时,专注的处理言语的组织,将精密杂乱的多线程作业分开来完结,效率也就更高了哦。