托福口语如何用细节扩展段落


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托福白话独立题考两道:
第一个题咱们叫做描绘题,要求考生描绘其了解的一个人,一个当地,一个物体或者一件工作;第二个题叫二选一题,要求考生从所给的两个选项里边选一个并给出支撑自己挑选的理由。两个独立题都清晰表明要学生在阶段里边给出满足的细节和比方来充分段子。

但大多数中国考生在答复这两个题的时分都会堕入一个问题,阶段过于空泛,段子显着不充分,许多时分都是在重复一个观念一个解释,而没有让这个阶段往前发展下去,导致得分偏低。

今天辛达托福代报就跟大家说说如何用细节拓展独立白话内容。

比方咱们来看一个例题:

Task 1
Talk about a popular gathering place in your town where people like to go. Describe the place and explain why people enjoy going there. Include specific examples and details in your response. 要求描绘一个人们爱集合的一个当地并解释原因。
考生拿到这个题大多会挑选一个shopping center,leisure center或者park这种比较合适各个年纪阶层的人去的当地作为topic,下面是某位考生的作答:
In my opinion, people in my town like to go to the central park for two reasons:
To begin with, they can do some exercise there. A lot of people will go to the park to do some sports to keep healthy. Sometimes the whole family will get together in the park to do exercise.
In addition,people could enjoy the beautiful views in the park and they feel relaxed. They can get close to nature and release pressure from work or study.
So that’s why people in my town will go to the park.
咱们来剖析这个段子,开门见山给出topic—park, 用两个理由支撑—do exercise and enjoy views,但整个答案短缺的便是细节充分的问题。比方do exercise后边,考生能够直接列出详细细节:
People like to play Tai Chi or go jogging in the morning,and the whole family may get together to go for a walk after dinner or play badminton in the park.
直接给出这种细节描绘exercise让段子更生动,而不是一向重复people do exercise or do sports.
相同的,第二层关于enjoy beautiful views后边也能够添加一些详细的景物描绘,trees, flowers, lake, bridge, fountain等。
下面给出一个比照的典范:
Well, a gathering place in my town is the central park.
One reason is that the park provides people a place to do some exercise. For example, old people would play Tai Chi in the early morning, students may go jogging around the park, and the whole family could go for a stroll after dinner. By doing some sports, they can keep healthy and energetic.
Plus, people have the chance to get close to nature and escape from the rest of the city like the concrete buildings, loads of schoolwork and huge pressure from work. I mean, they could feel the fresh air blowing their face, the smell of the flowers in the park.
So that’s why citizens like to go to the park.
这样整个白话答复会显得更充分,更简单拿到高分。既然充分阶段很重要,下面咱们来介绍几种常用办法弥补细节。
拿自己,身边的人直接举比方

例题:Task 2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students benefit more from classes with a large number of students than they do from smaller classes. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion.
这个题,其实便是小班好仍是大班好的问题。挑选没有对错,只要能充分证明自己的挑选即可。
学生的答复提纲是: smaller class is better
1)Get more personal attention from professor
2)Concentrate better
关于第一个reason,咱们能够直接举一个身边的比方加以阐明。
比方:taking myself as an example, last summer, I took park in a painting training class and there were only five students in the class, so I got more time to interact with the teacher about my weakness in painting.
许多学生质疑说这样的比方有说服力吗。但事实上独立题本来便是侧重考生的familiar things,所以辛达托福代报推荐用身边的小比方作为支撑。

举反例,正的不行就说反的
相同上面这个例题的第二个理由,是学生常常会用到的一个全能理由,但许多学生都不知道怎样把它加以扩展。
说:Students can concentrate better in smaller class because it’s more quiet.
后边的思路就干涸了,这个时分就能够用举反例的细节扩展办法:however, in bigger classes, there are so many people that they may easily talk, laugh, joke around or gossip, which makes noise in the class to distract others.
给出详细的数据
这一个方面一般在咱们用到时间和钱这两个全能理由的时分会用到。

例:Describe the most efficient type of transportation in your country. Use details and examples to explain your response.
Topic: airplane
Reason 1: fast,save time
Reason 2: no traffic congestion
关于第一个reason, 咱们能够直接给出数据和比照:
For example,it only takes me 2 hours to fly from one city to another, however, when Ichoose to take train, it may cost me more than 20 hours.充分阐明taking airplane is more efficient.

例2:You prefer to watch movie in the movie theater or at home.
Topic: at home
Reason 1: save money
Reason 2: have more options when choosing movies
关于第一个理由,咱们能够用倍数形式来显示在家看电影多省钱:watching movies in the movie theater costs 2 times more than watching same movies at home.

例3:这座建筑很高。
The building is very tall.
扩展细节:
The building is as tall as 468 meters, ranking first in Asia and third in the world. There are 68 spheres in the building and the three biggest ones are observatories, where tourists can have a birds-eye view of the whole city. It has been the land mark of the city since it was completed.

4、抽象的名词给出小的并列比方加以详细化
Example 1.那里有许多食物。
There is a lot of traditional Chinese food.
There is a lot of traditional Chinese food like Fried rice with egg, Gong pao Chicken, Ma Po Tofu, Dumplings, Pecking Duck and so on.
Example 2. 那里风景优美。
It has beautiful scenery there.
It has beautiful scenery there. I can smell the grass and flowers,hear the cries of the birds, and feel the bracing breeze on my face.
Example 3我能够了解一些外国的好玩的工作
I would be able to know about interesting stuff in the foreign countries.
I would be able to know about interesting stuff including their customs, cultures, and histories.

下面咱们再结合一些学生的答复,归纳运用以上几个办法示范,怎样用细节扩展白话阶段。

例1. describe a person you admire the most. Give specific details and examples.
学生答复:Well, the person I admire the most is my English teacher Lee, who was teaching me at junior high school. Here is some reasons I’d like to share with you.
For starters, my English teacher Lee is really responsible, he paid a lot of attention on our school work and paper and help us improve.
Plus, he has a sense of humor. He always tell us some stories to make us laugh, so we feel relaxed in his class. All the students like his class.
So, that is why I admire my English teacher most! Thank you.
剖析:关于人物的描绘,中心在人物的性格(quality,characteristics, features)的一个描绘,该生描绘教师responsible 和 humorous,可是都不充分,咱们需求给出详细的体现和比方。
Responsible—for example, he would use his spare time to give us lots of detailed comments on our paper in order to make us improve.
Humorous—he may tell us some funny jokes or stories or even imitate the behaviors of Mr.Bean in the class, thus, we all feel relaxing in the class and can study much better.

例2.Is it beneficial for students to have computers? Use details and examples in your response.
学生答复:
As far as I am concerned,I think it is good for students to have computers.
The most important reason is that they can improve their study efficiency. They can use computer to search for some useful information to study better.
Another reason is that they can entertain themselves by using computer. Students have huge pressure in study, when they go back home, they could use the computer to release pressure.
剖析:关于提高学习功率和文娱放松,是咱们常用的两个理由,可是咱们能够用细节把这些理由说得更清楚。
Search for some useful information using the computer à For example, when they write the paper or do research, they can find some materials or resources online like the data, the examples, the statistical tests and soon.
Entertain themselves and release pressure à for instance,they could watch some movies, listen to music or play games to escape from the loads of problems in study.

例3.Describe a subject which is difficult but also important. Use details and examples in your response.
学生答复:well, the subject which is difficult but important is Mathematics.
To begin with, it is difficult. I am poor in math; I think I have to spend a lot of time doing the math problems.
However,math is also very important. If I can’t study math well, I will also fail in some other science class like the physics.
剖析:这个答复过于简略,没有结合这个学科谈详细的细节。比方在着重数学很难,能够给出许多细节原因:it needs strong logical ability, I have to recite lots of formulas and theories; it’s too abstract, hard to understand.

例4. Describe an interesting book you have ever read. Give specific reasons and details in your response.
学生答复:In my opinion,one interesting I have read is a cooking book, which is sent from my friend jerry before I went abroad to study.
To begin with, I can learn how to cook using this book. It teaches me to do some traditional Chinese food and also even some simple foreign food. If I can cook food, I can take care of myself and even invite some classmates and friends to enjoy food cooked by me.
In addition, I could also learn some culture from other countries by knowing their food.
剖析:关于这本书的描绘仍是不行,要点放在功能上,可是也不能忽略关于这个物体自身的描绘。
比方在描绘这本书能teach me cook.最好能够讲讲里边的内容和特征: it shows me the specific steps while cooking the food, even adds a lot of vivid pictures, which makes it easier to follow while doing it by myself.
此外第二点也是一样,只是提到learn some foreign culture about the food.
爽性后边再给一个比方,for instance, When I make the sushi, a type of Japanese food, I learn that people in Japan like to eat some raw food, which is considered to be more nutritious.

以上这些办法,童鞋们都能够牢记在心,然后用近几年的白话独立1,2题,加以操练。让自己的白话答复愈加充分,得高分。辛达托福代报期望上述对你有帮助!