托福写作:写好让步段


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许多同学有疑问,在一篇完整的独立作文中,退让段是不是必定要写呢?可不能够不写呢?

老师:退让段不是有必要要写的,考生们能够在作文里只提出支撑自己观念的两至三个正面的理由,这样也能够得出最后的定论。

比方说是否赞同“新的科技产品发布,过段时间购买比马上购买要好”,咱们完全能够只提出过段时间购买的两个正面理由:一. 价格会更廉价; 二. 产品的功能会更优化,这样整篇作文的论点仍是明确的。

可是这篇文章当然也能够加上退让段,过段时间再买的害处,或是马上购买的长处。这样会显得这篇文章论证的逻辑愈加严密和全面,咱们确实是进行了好坏对比后,才得出自己的观念。

特别要注意的是,假如作文题目本身的观念的反面并不能够被忽略,那么辛达托福代报主张退让段是必定要写的,这样显得咱们得出自己的观念才不勉强。

比方作文题目“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.”。咱们能够写正面的两个观念,即玩电脑游戏的两个长处,可是咱们同样不能忽略玩电脑游戏的害处,所以就要写退让段了,不然观念就会显得过于过火。

怎样写退让段?这又是个问题

重中之重: “让一小步,进一大步”!

退让段的最重要目的是对退让内容地不断削弱,以退为进,先提出害处,然后再否定它。可是要记住的是退让段与支撑段结构一致,也是有主题句,然后要对主题句进行展开解说。

所以常见的套路是:

主题句(不可否认A也有害处)+解说(进一步解说说明害处是什么)+退让(可是呢,这些害处能够被解决掉,或是不太重要)

1.退让段主题句写法

退让段的主题句一般是这样的:不可否认的是,A可能会有一些害处。这儿咱们尽量语气要含蓄些,下面是一些会用到的词组表达:

——Admittedly / Undoubtedly / There is no denying that / It cannot be denied that

——May / might / possibly / probably

——One / one or two / a couple of / minor / several

——To some extent / to some degree

【常见过错】

许多考生退让段用although最初,可是although后边只能跟一个从句,所以后边主题句的内容就没有方法展开了。

2. 退让如何实现

退让段的表述能够参考以下模式:

?退让方的长处比支撑方的长处非必须,或者支撑方的害处比起长处来非必须。

However, the advantages of A are more important than those of B.

?退让方长处与支撑方长处比起来较少,或支撑方缺点与长处比起来较少。

However, the advantages of A are far more than those / that of B.

However, the advantages of A outnumber those / that of B.

?对方的长处,我方也能够有方法得到;我方的害处能够有方法消除。

However, the problem can be solved by …

However, the negative influence can be eliminated by …

3. 退让段范例赏析

Q:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

主题句:

Admittedly, playing computer games does harbor several drawbacks.

解说:

Some children are addicted to playing computergames and ignore their studies, thereby suffering from poor academic performance. Also, over exposure to computer games with high concentration will sooner or later cause the impairment of their eyesight.

退让:

However, most children are able to control themselves to play games in moderation. Also, their parents can intervene and supervise as well. Specifically, they could set strict rules on how much time their children could play games everyday and on what conditions they could do so, therefore it is completely unnecessary to forbid them to play computer games.

以上就是辛达托福代报写出好的退让段的具体内容,希望能助力你的托福写作!