托福满分作文的三大核心


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  满分作文的三大中心是构造、内容和言语。

首要我们先从构造、内容和言语三个方面揭秘托福作文独立使命得满分的本相。
以下题为例: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.

一、构造

按体裁区分,独立使命归于议论文,而观念、理由、论据、定论和证实是议论文的五个要素。详细来说,“观念”是文章的中心,“理由”是观念建立的依据,两者构成因果关系;“论据”是对理由的详细解说,多为案例;“定论”是对观念的重申,两者一脉相承、头尾照应;而整个写作进程即是一个“证实”的进程。

要想作文得高分,这五要素就必须面面俱到,如此才干写出构造严谨、条理清晰的高分作文

先上一篇范文(下拉可见全文):
  As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life. Nevertheless, some senior citizens cherish the memory of good old days with healthy environment and harmonious interpersonal relationships. As far as I’m concerned, despite serious environmental pollution and prevalence of materialism, 【布景介绍,作者给出了两个时代的比照】 I still believe today’s life to be easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. 【提出观念】 I am going to elaborate my viewpoint from three aspects as follows. 【过渡句,承上启下】
  To begin with, modern communication technology has changed our lives a lot and provides us with much convenience. 【理由 1】To be more specific, with the wide application of smartphones and the Internet, it is possible for people to contact each other even if they live separately. 【证实为何理由 1 能够推出观念】 For example, Lily, one of my best friends, is lucky to be admitted into a famous university in America, which means we cannot always hang out together. But thanks to the modern communication technology, we still keep frequent touch with each other on Skype anytime, anywhere. Therefore we feel never apart.

【比如 1】
  Besides, a variety of means of transportation make it quick and cozy for people to travel. 【理由 2】 Subways, taxis, private cars, high-speed railways shorten the distance between places. 【证实为何理由 2 能够推出观念】A good example in point is that my grandparents used to live in suburbs, and anytime they want to do some shopping in urban center, it usually took them 2 hours, owing to bumpy roads and low-efficient old-fashioned vehicles. On the contrary, with great improvement of road condition and advanced traffic modes, they only have to spend 20 minutes a most traveling from home to the city. If it is very hot in summer, all modern vehicles are air-conditioned, which can make the trip very comfortable.

【比如 2】
  Last but not least, today’s ample food supply and various food choices are something beyond imagination in the past. 【理由 3】 Decades ago, in China, all foods used to be arranged by the government. In other words, it was impossible for people to purchase what they liked to eat. 【证实为何理由 3 能够推出观念】 For example, an average family was only allocated 1 pound of pork and 2 pounds of rice. In contrast, nowadays, we never have to worry about the lack of food because supermarkets and snack bars abound.

【比如 3】
  To sum up, because of the progress of economy and technology, I am convinced that life at present is more comfortable and easier, which can be well demonstrated through examples of convenient communication, quick and cozy traffic modes and sufficient food supply and choices. 【总结理由,重申观念】 If our government takes efficient measures to solve the environmental problem, our world will become a better place to live.

【提出建议,展望未来】

议论文除了五要素,在给出观念之前多会有简略的布景介绍,不需求长,三两句话即可,为观念的提出造势。

二、内容

这篇范文经过通讯、交通和饮食三个方面,一起证实如今的孩子相较其祖父辈日子的更轻松、舒服,每个理由下面都有详细的案例作为细节支持,让证实更有说服力。

以饮食为例,作者举例说,曾经食物由政府分配,数量有约束,大家不能为所欲为买到需求的食物;而如今则大不一样,在超市里大家能够买到任何所需物品。这种新旧比照,更明显的体现出现代社会物资丰厚、大家的选择权添加,由此可推断大家的日子变得更快捷、舒服,然后证实观念。

三、言语

一篇高分作文在言语上,首要要确保语法正确,用词恰当,这样才干精确达意。在此基础上能够寻求更多样、高档的表达。例如,文章最初要体现“社会发展迅速,大家的日子发生了天翻地覆的变化”这一含义,最常见的表达为:
  Sample 1: Our society develops quickly, and people’s life has changed greatly.
  Sample 2: With the rapid development of society, enormous change has happened in people’s life.
  Sample 3: As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life.

经过三个语句比照可知,其间“迅速”的三种表达方式,quickly 最为平平,rapid 居中,remarkable 最好。同样的,要表达“天翻地覆”的含义,tremendous 就要比 great 或者 enormous 好的多,别的更换的词还有 considerable,drastic,significant 等等。

言语的优化需求不断的堆集和练习,多记多练,不断扩大自个的语料库,唯有如此,文章才会写的越来越美丽,可是我们许多考生平时不练笔,不堆集语料,想单纯依靠“杂乱单词,黄金句型”就拿高分——根本没戏。

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