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　　托福写作备考：托福作文高频易错点汇总

　　1.用词不当

　　学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，可是要注意的是一些最最根本的过错是不能犯的。

　　In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

　　——problems应改为questions

　　2.拼写过错

　　这儿的拼写过错不是指在考试时候的误打，而是自身对词汇拼写回忆的过错。

　　In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.

　　——judgement应改为judgment

　　3.乱用大词

　　First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn’t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

　　这儿的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该语句还有以下问题：

　　1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因而children的呈现就显得很不可思议;

　　2)although和but是不能连用的;

　　3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

　　4.表达中式

　　The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.

　　5.表意重复

　　They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.

　　前面现已说到了朋友，后面又说到朋友。

　　The show is so compelling but attractive.

　　compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这儿这么写就让人不明白。

　　6.固定用法过错

　　To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

　　——To some extends应改为To some extent

　　7.例证夸大

　　For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

　　尽管好心的谎话是必要的，可是其成效显然没有这么大。

　　8.成分剩余

　　According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

　　该句中的shows that是剩余的成分。

　　9.词性紊乱

　　However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

　　语句中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

　　10.文体不正式

　　All of the players gonna to tell the truth in attempt to win $500，000.

　　——gonna过于口语化。

　　In addition， I think people shoudn’t always tell the truth to others.

　　——在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写，这儿应该写should not。

　　11.两个独立语句间无连词

　　Another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic， and it’s suitable for them to choose such jobs， which will provide them with rich experience that is essential for their future success.

　　这个过错犯的频率适当高，必定要注意。

　　12.时态过错

　　托福大作文一般运用现在时态，除了拿过去事情作为比如用过去时态。

　　Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

　　—— claimed应该改为claim

　　13.不知所云

　　They also mention that in modern society there are too much entertainment bothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the success.

　　这句话彻底不知道是什么意思，逻辑紊乱，这是中国学生经常犯的过错。

　　总结这些前车之鉴有助于我们在往后的新托福写作中尽量防止类似问题的呈现，可是这些经历的集成还是需求我们不断地操练才干到达的。所以我们在操练新托福写作的过程中，要在防止过错的一起加强写作能力。

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