写作常见失分点


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  托福写作过程中,考生许多时分由于自己的忽略或是根底没打好,犯一些初级过错,这些过错往往成为考生的托福写作失分点,接下来辛达代报进行详细介绍。

  1.结构不平行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当运用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时分,应当运用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

  2.不知所云例如:Many companies began using computers mouth.

  3.阶段过长,不分段主语与动词共同问题She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不共同。

  4.语句别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.遣词过长或不清。换言之,语句显得滑稽可笑。

  5.不要运用缩写在正式的写作中不要运用缩写方式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而应当运用单词的完好理式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。

  6.相关词语重复Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的首要主语和首要动词前运用连词。

  7.语句不完好Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.语句没有首要主语或首要动词,由于其实它应是一个从句。这是一个十分常见的过错,修正的办法是将两个语句连接起来。

  8.不要运用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式,意思也过于含糊,不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个愈加详细的单词,如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。

  9.书写难以辨认信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确,或许让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的,应当解说为什么这样,由于读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为稳妥起见,应当运用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantage able.虽然看起来像个单词,其实不是,至少不是个英文单词。运用这个单词的另一种方式。

  10.介词剩余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表明这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因此不能在它们前面添加介词。

  11.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很一般大多数人都现已知道到了,因此就没有必要再说出来。

  以上就是辛达代报带来的托福写作常见失分过错,考生在平常的写作操练中,能够细心修正自己的文章,从中发现自己的常见过错并留意防止。最终,辛达代报预祝广大考生早日实现梦想,飞跃重洋!