你的托福写作跑题了吗


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  考生在托福写作部分会犯的最大的过错就是审题过错,这种跑题的文章即便写得再好,也和高分无缘。那么你的托福写作跑题了吗?

  同学们考写作考了这么多年,大多数命题的形式都已纯熟于心,这种看似"娴熟"的表象下藏着巨大的隐患--同学们很有可能由于看得太快而疏忽某个决定标题意思的关键词。例如:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the only main cause for people's unhealthy eating habits.

  看到这个标题,同学们会开端想,有没有other reasons for unhealthy habits,想出三条如:

  1. People's tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours;

  2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets";

  3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever.

  综上所述,advertising is not the only cause.

  这个写法看起来十分完备,但其实犯了一个不起眼却严峻的过错--标题不是要咱们证明it is not the only cause,而是要咱们去证明it is not the only main cause。多一个"main",意思是很不相同的。假如咱们只需要证明it is not the only cause,那么找出other causes即可即例1中的写法。可是,假如咱们要证明it is not the only main cause,就需要证明other causes that we mentioned are also main causes,这就需要在每一段中加上一些专门的说明。或许,更简略的方法是去证advertising is not even a cause, 直接在每段的结尾加上advertising与该段所论说的unhealthy eating habit无关的论说即可。If it is not a cause, how can it be the onlymain cause? 这样一来,就不必经过证明还有其他main cause来辩驳了。

  事实上,证明某种cause是main cause仍是挺有难度的,因而笔者推荐同学们用后一种方法进行论说。因而,文章仍是disagree,而三段的主题句别离应该是:

  1. People's tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours, and it is obvious that they are too busy to be influenced by advertising;

  2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets", and this is more like a result of human nature, the pursuit of beauty, but not advertising;

  3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever, and it is quite clear that no advertising encourages them to do so.

  以上就是辛达代报带来的关于托福独立写作的相关介绍。期望大家都能够在托福写作中留意以上几点,从而防止不必要的失分。最终,辛达代报预祝广大考生早日实现梦想,飞跃重洋!