托福写作解析


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  标题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.这道标题讲的是“和钱比较,人们更在乎大众的认可。即便没有钱赚,大众饿认可依然可以激励人们努力工作“。

  从标题的关键字可以看出,这道标题实际上是一道比照类的标题,比照的对象是“金钱”和“大众认可”。这两个关键词别离代表着“物质”和“精力”,对人们都很重要。其实,金钱和大众认可对人们来说都很重要,但是在写作的时分,咱们如同从大众认可来写比较简单。由于,大众的认可不仅仅是对个人能力的认可这一外表的现象,还可以从大众认可开端延伸,然后带来更多的东西。

  接下来,辛达代报就从大众认可比较重要的视点(也是赞同标题),来阐释本文。看一下可以从哪些方面来拓宽写作思路:

  1)不可否认人们愈加注重大众认可,由于这和个人利益休戚相关;

  2)和大众认可不可分割的是由此带来的“自我满意“;

  3)大众的认可让人可以与别人调和共处。

  根据以上拓宽思路,咱们来看一下文章的内容结构:

  1)最初段:告知标题的写作布景,然后引出写作的主题,最终部分要提出自身的观念。

  One of the most enduring public controversies in my country is the one regarding whether people care more about public recognition than about money. Theoretically, it is true that people certainly can’t do everything without money. But in reality, I think this theory amounts to an oversimplification.作者开篇提出标题中的问题,而且将之引申为一个国家问题。然后着重这个话题的重要性,然后在最初段尾提出自己的观念。

  2)中间段:从3个分观念动身,论说最初段提出的观念

  分观念1:Firstly, what should not be disavowed is that people put more emphasis on the pursuit of public recognition because it is closely connected with the profit. 不可否认人们愈加注重大众认可,由于这和个人利益休戚相关。

  分观念2:Secondly, what cannot be separated from public recognition is the sense of self-satisfaction. 和大众认可不可分割的是由此带来的“自我满意。

  分观念3:Lastly, being recognized by the public puts people into a more harmonious relationship with others. 大众的认可让人可以与别人调和共处。

  3)结尾段:总结上文观念,重申观念

  In conclusion,given the potential economic benefits, the incomparable self-satisfaction and the immeasurable connections, public recognition always take precedence over money.

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