托福综合写作解析


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  摘要:写作是新托福考试四项中相对来说比较好容易得分的一项,可是事实证明大部分考生并不能考出满意的成绩,究其原因应该是归纳写作失分严重,而导致归纳写作难以提分的原因主要是听力细节信息的提取不行精确或完整。所以,怎么才干快速高效地进步归纳写作听力信息提取的才能?跟随辛达托福代报一起来看看吧


  这个问题一直是托福归纳写作的难点和要点。其实,辛达托福代报认为最底子的办法是进步听力的才能。进步听力才能不仅对归纳写作有很大优点,关于托福听力而言也有很大协助。然而,这个办法需求考生有满足的备考时刻,有满足的听力操练。关于一些时刻严重的同学而言,这个办法就显得不行实际。当然,辛达托福代报有另一种办法:依据阅览材料的内容猜想听力信息,也是归纳写作教学中经常被选用的办法。这个办法简单,可是关于听力细节信息的获取肯定是不行精确的,所以不行靠谱。个人以为,了解相关论题的词汇和布景常识关于考生们掌握听力信息是极为重要的。很多学生在考前的备考某种程度上是存在必定的误区的,他们以为 TPO 自始至终刷一遍就能够了,事实上刷题是有必要的,可是刷题的要点是要总结和归纳,找出考试规则和考点。下面,我将以归纳写作中的生态类论题为例跟我们剖析一下新托福归纳写作备考中论题词汇和布景常识的重要性和运用,相信能够协助考生们在有用的时刻内科学地打破它们。生态类论题真题:

  在 TPO 的题目中,最具有代表性的生态类论题分布在 TPO 14,TPO 18,TPO 20,TPO21,TPO 23 和 TPO 26,它们分别研究的是:树木收回性采伐的优点、佛罗里达榧树的维护、大火给森林带来的损害、转基因树的优点、雪松数量削减、斑马贝的侵略。具体内容归纳如下(阅览 --- 听力):

  TPO 14:收回性采伐的优点

  1.make room for the growth of the new trees---deprive the soil of thenutrients produced during the process of decomposition

  2.minimize the danger of insect infestation---some insects are greatcontributors to the health of the forest

  3.provide usable wood by industries and create additional jobs for local people---transportation of these woods is expensive and the jobs provided are temporary


  TPO 18:佛罗里达榧树削减的解决方案

  1.reestablish Torreya in the same locationwith the coolest and dampest microclimate---the microclimate is strongly influenced by either global warming or the drained wetlands

  2.move Torreya to an entirely different location---Torreya will threaten other endangered species

  3.preserve Torreya in research center---the research center can not ensure a large and genetically-diverse population of the Torreya trees, which means the trees are not capable of resisting the disease。


  TPO 20:Let it burn policy 带来的危害

  1.damage the trees a s well a s theve  getation---there appears to be a bigger diversity for the plants

  2.bring negative effects to the wildlife---small animals like the rabbits and hares are more likely to inhabit in the ideal place

  3.do harm to the local tourism, negatively contributing to the economy---only if it happens every year would it be a problem fortourism


  TPO 21:转基因树带来的优点

  1.hardier, more likely to survive---uniform in genes, they will be unresistant to the climate change or the insects

  2.bring a number of economic benefits to planters---more cost for the farmers, be charged more when purchasing the seeds; pay again for the seeds

  3.prevent over exploitation of wild trees; protect endangered native trees---compete the local trees for the resources


  TPO 23:雪松数量削减的原因

  1.attacked by insect parasites; beetles-- -healthy yellow cedar with powerful chemicals do not suffer from the beetles' attack

  2.attribute to brown bears; eat---no bears dwelling on the island

  3.change of the climate; freezing roots- --changing temperature does not take responsibility for the descending population

  TPO 26:斑马贝的侵略

  1.unstoppable; transported by ships to North America---the fresh water should be refilled with the salt water in the sea, which will kill the mussels

  2.dominate new habitat; without predators---birds observe the arrival of these mussels and they are going to change their food to themussels

  3.lead to overall decline in the overall fish population; plankton eater---they can generate nutrients which fishes in the bottom of the water can feed on

  从上面的调查点结合阅览与听力的内容,我们给考生们总结了生态类论题的考点设置:

  从单词的层面上:

  物 种 名 称 词 汇 ( 植 物 ):plant / cedar /plankton / Terroya tree / wild berry / organism/

  black locust tree 物种称号词汇(动物):wildlife / insect /beetle / bear / mussel / hare / rabbit / shellfish触及栖息地词汇:habitat / dwell / inhabit /habitat / bottom / wetland

  生物链触及词汇:food chain / plankton eater/ predator / parasite / disease / infestation /

  infest / pest-resistant / resist / dominate /reproduce / germinate / nutrient关于物种侵略:wipe out / crowd out / be aggressive / invade / invasion / colonize /compete for表明物种数量的降:decline / descend /shrink / extinct / endangered / minimize /devastate / destroy

  科学技术层面的单词:genetic modification / genetic

  technology / genetically –diverse / geneticallymodified / uniform / gene / pesticide

  常出现在归纳写作阅览和听力部分的考点:生物削减原因:

  Environment: temperature / climate change /global warming Technology: genetically-modified plants / pest-unresistant / uniform in genesInvasion: compete for nutrient /infestation / parasite / predator

  生物维护办法:

  Environment: temperature / climate change /relocationTechnology: research center

  避免生物扩散的办法:

  Biological introduction: predatorHuman activities: capture (financiallybeneficial) / chemical control (poison /pesticide)

  考题应对:

  通过对 2017 年 1 月至 5 月部分归纳写作题目的总结发现,掌握以上考点关于应对归纳写作起着至关重要的作用。

  例 1: 在 2017.02.26 考 试 中 讨 论 的 内 容 是 避免 New Guinean Flatworms 不断扩散的办法,终究的办法就触及到以上所提到的考点(词汇和内容)1.biological control:引进 predator,或者依赖当地的鸟类 --- 会导致被引进的种群无法控制,并且当地的鸟类也不吃这种虫子,味道难吃;2.chemicalcontrol:运用 pesticides--- 目前没有十分有用的针对该虫子的杀虫剂,独一的一种 lindane 稍微有用,但不显着;3. soil fertilization:翻耕土地,提高肥力,运用肥料提高土壤温度,杀死虫卵 --- 这个办法不容易达到杀死虫卵所需温度,效果欠好。例 2:2017.01.14 考试讨论到避免 snakeheads 扩散的办法是否有用,考点中有两个点是以上提到的考点 1. 制定法令避免人们运送 snakehead fish--- 即使人们不运送,他们也能够很多扩散,因为数量多;2.鼓舞渔民去捕捞 snakeheads,因为可食可卖 --- 会起反作用,渔民们为获取利润会很多饲养;3. 研究毒药毒死 snakeheads,储存原有鱼类 --- 储存的鱼类也不能生长到原有体积,因为吃了中毒的微生物和昆虫。例 3:2017.04.23 考试讨论到鳗鱼数量削减的原因(解决方案),其间两个点也触及到以上的考点 1.欧洲海域都在建大坝,这阻止了鳗鱼回归来繁衍 ---树立带洞的大坝,鳗鱼能够穿过洞,游过去繁衍;

       2.鳗鱼的食物鱼里面有寄生虫,导致他们感染寄生虫 ---能够把有寄生虫的鱼引到其他鳗鱼接触不到的地方;

  3. 鳗鱼繁衍的方位很难找到,所以很难帮他们扫除危险 ---科学家们能够运用电子设备确认鳗鱼的方位,维护鳗鱼。

  以上辛达托福代报的总结并不能完全对应目前新托福归纳写作的生态论题考点,更要留意一些新的考点,尤其是TPO 套题中所没有触及的。可是,从剖析中能够看到,以上的信息点是有必要要在备考中引起留意的,这些总结的布景常识对听力内容的获取还是很有协助的。因此,在备考过程中要长于总结要点,不能总是题海战术,既耽误了时刻也耗尽了耐性。