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在托福写作的课堂上,关于怎么写独立写作的最初段是每位同学在The first节课上都会遇到的问题。
当被问到这个问题的时分,许多同学的The first反应是最初段还不简略吗?可是真的要练习起来,这个“简略”的问题却显得不那么“简略”了。
那下面是我上课这么久以来,辛达托福代报总结同学们在写最初段会呈现的较突出的两大类问题:
1. 根底较好的同学最初段倾向于写得内容很杂乱、许多。
2. 一般根底不太好的同学最初段写得又太过于简略。
这样写最初段的话,都不利于拿高分,咱们就拿TPO 42 的独立写作来看:
TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A 同学是这样写最初段的:
Working, the only method to earn money, plays an increasingly momentous role in our daily life. When it comes to the issue about which type of task is more satisfied, it has arouse extensive attention of the society, which thus triggered a storm of argument. People's opinion differ from person to person, and culture to culture. Some might highly prefer to finish various kind of work, while others may strongly choose the job with some similarity on the contrary. As for me, I absolutely support the prior one mainly contributing to the following reasons.
B 同学是这样写的最初段:
I agree with the second opinion.
那么A同学和B同学的最初段写作别离呈现了什么问题呢?
首先,A 同学的最初段写了将近100个单词,并不是说最初段字写多了欠好,而是同学们要考虑到考试时刻(30 分钟)是非常有限的,由于咱们除掉构思和写完之后回头做查看,剩下的写作时刻只是只有25分钟左右了罢了。
而且,在独立写作的评分里,最初段和结尾段有必要要有,可是咱们评分的重点是看主体段。
所以一般来说,辛达托福代报认为比较合理的写作组织时刻是把30 分钟的时刻各分配2分钟到最初段和结尾段去。如此看来2分钟打100个单词左右是极其困难的,所以这便是最初段像A 同学写得这么杂乱冗长的,一般反映的问题便是不行时刻写完一篇完好的作文。
还有一个问题是:写这么长,给考官的感觉是很冗长、不简洁,且写得繁琐,考生比较容易犯一些初级的语法错误,比方A 同学的最初段就呈现了好几处小语法错误,这会给考官带来欠好的印象,间接会拉低考生的分数。
其次,B 同学写得太过于简略了,即直接给出了态度说支持第二点,给考官的感觉便是一头雾水、不明就里。
所以怎么写好独立写作的最初段呢?在我看来,便是简略的两点即可:改写题目+ 自己的态度(通过改写题目引出论题,告诉考官咱们在评论一个怎样的论题,再给出自己的态度是什么,这样写才更有逻辑性。)
写最初段可套用的句式有:
a. People are often involved in a heated debate about whether…+ 完好的句子
b. There exists a heated debate about whether …+ 完好的句子
举个比方:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research. (2012-12-18)
咱们能够先思考题目中哪些地方能够进行替换。
比方:
The main role 可改写成 the prior mission /priority
A university professor 可改写成 educationist
Educate 换成 teach
Do research 换成 conduct/perform investigations
再套进句式,最初段就出来了:
People, especially the students and educationalists are often involved in a discussion about whether the priority of a college professor is to teach students or conduct investigations. As for me, the answer is the latter one.
给出态度的时分直接用代词former/latter one, 就不用在标明自己态度的时分再改写一次了,这样既保证了正确,又节省了时刻,并且能给考官一目了然、简洁的感觉。
最初段给考官一个好的印象,自然更加有利于考试在写作方面拿下高分,希望同学们能在看似简略的最初段下功夫,作用会事半功倍。以上便是辛达托福代报今天给大家分享的内容,希望对大家能够有所帮助